Do Now: Put your college essay on your desk. Re-read it for subject/verb agreement problems: Example: If you was in the room... My family and I am going...
Classwork: Peer editing
You will answer the questions below on sticky notes and attach them to the essay.
1. What specific paragraph did you like?
2. What part wasn't clear?
3. Were you able to imagine how the writer felt? If not, what might have helped you to empathize?
4. What is the writer's thesis?
5. Is the introduction powerful and attention-grabbing?
6. Suggestions?
Homework: Timed write tomorrow on The Metamorphosis. Review your notes.
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